I'm taking Studio in Art in school, and this was one of my homework assignments. This KILLED me, but it came out so cool! I got a 97, +5 because I turned it in a day early.
First of all, I must say that you have done a very good job on this piece. The overall effect of the picture is quite impressive. You have brought out the texture of the tree bark very well.The lines have been drawn very well in the the tree,and that gives it an almost real feel. The grass is drawn very well,again. Now, the water. The water,when seen by the eye in nature, has a very flowy feel, because, that is the manner of water.The work of the artist is to bring the same feel. The strokes which you have used to show the water,gives it a very "hard" feel,not the free flowing feel, if you know what I mean. Other than that, the picture is ripping amazing! Hats off! Keep up the amazing work! I'll be watching you!
The overall effect of the picture is quite impressive.
You have brought out the texture of the tree bark very well.The lines have been drawn very well in the the tree,and that gives it an almost real feel.
The grass is drawn very well,again.
Now, the water. The water,when seen by the eye in nature, has a very flowy feel, because, that is the manner of water.The work of the artist is to bring the same feel. The strokes which you have used to show the water,gives it a very "hard" feel,not the free flowing feel, if you know what I mean.
Other than that, the picture is ripping amazing! Hats off! Keep up the amazing work! I'll be watching you!
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